sharpnova's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Attack of Crazy Folks]

5% upgrade...?

i don't think you understand the point of upgrade-based games - it's the fun of progressing. getting stronger/richer/etc.

5% is nothing.

also the shooting and explosion noises are WAY too loud.. and not pleasant sounds either.

Cutepop responds:

Thank you for your feedback. We will definitely review the upgrade system and audio in our future project.

[Decepticide]

bugs. once i took an elevator up and was jumping up into the next screen while it went up and suddenly the view shifted to another room that didn't even have an elevator in it. i couldn't see myself. i could still use health packs and shoot but i couldn't see myself. i then hit r, and it reset the entire game

second time i just froze while a blue door was sliding down.

also i don't like the handling of the character

Joben7 responds:

I'm sorry about the bugs but I'm thankful that you took the time to review and let me know of them so I can try and fix them, thanks

[Space Incident]

i liked the art and ambient noise. the sound effects were great too. the theme was good.

i killed off one guy on purpose because he was annoying.

then the redhead who i suspect was an alien trying to trick us into going to earth so the aliens would know where earth was, via his boosted laser proposal.

then i was never able to do anything with the other guy but shoot the laser, try the engine, and fix them.

unbeatable. so score lowered drastically

Vogd3 responds:

You can beat it, but the game is not easy.

[GRAND ADVENTURE!]

the thing about this game is that it is.

Emptygoddess responds:

You make a valid point.

[Sherlock Holmes 2]

I had to subtract half a star for this:

In Author Comments you said "police is" when you should have said "police are."

"is" is the third person singular present of "be"
"are" is the plural present of "be"

Police is a plural noun referring to a group of policemen and women.

You might modify the clause to "The policeman is convinced Charles Williams has murdered Jimmy Johnston,"

But I am going to assume you intended on referring to the plural "police" in which case the clause should have read:

"The police are convinced Charles Williams has murdered Jimmy Johnston,"

I used these resources:

https://www.google.com/webhp?sourceid=chrome-instant&rlz=2C1ASUM_enUS0536US0536&ion=1&espv=2&ie=UTF-8#q=define%3A%20is

https://www.google.com/search?q=define%3A+are&rlz=2C1ASUM_enUS0536US0536&oq=define%3A+are&aqs=chrome.0.69i59j69i58.1167j0j7&sourceid=chrome&es_sm=93&ie=UTF-8

https://www.google.com/webhp?sourceid=chrome-instant&rlz=2C1ASUM_enUS0536US0536&ion=1&espv=2&ie=UTF-8#q=define%3A%20police

https://www.google.com/webhp?sourceid=chrome-instant&rlz=2C1ASUM_enUS0536US0536&ion=1&espv=2&ie=UTF-8#q=present+tense

also.. game good

DeathTiger0 responds:

Hi sharpova,

Thank you for your comment, this is has been fixed.
Of course you are right and even in the game we used the correct plural form: "There's no time, the police are after me."

Thanks again!

[No One Was Here]

nice. has a shadow of the colossus/titan souls feel, due to the music and boss

it needs to be made far more clear that you jump higher when you're jumping along with your past self.

that wasn't logical and didn't fit with the mechanics of the game.

jeremyaburns responds:

Thanks for the feedback! The controls in reverse should be exactly the same as going forwards. Your time-reversed self can "jump" really high if you fall really far though.

[Drink Beer, Neglect Family]

wife wants therapy
daughter dating a black guy - score 3/5
son dropped out of college

esayitch responds:

It doesn't say black guy O.o, it says gang member, I never thought of it being a black guy necessarily.

[Ultimo Soccer UDC]

I have an issue where when I hold down the down arrow it scrolls down on this webpage.

It looks like it would be fun though.

UltimoGames responds:

I heard this before, will do it right in my next game, you can also use WASD, thx for the comments!