sharpnova's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Space Incident]

i liked the art and ambient noise. the sound effects were great too. the theme was good.

i killed off one guy on purpose because he was annoying.

then the redhead who i suspect was an alien trying to trick us into going to earth so the aliens would know where earth was, via his boosted laser proposal.

then i was never able to do anything with the other guy but shoot the laser, try the engine, and fix them.

unbeatable. so score lowered drastically

Vogd3 responds:

You can beat it, but the game is not easy.

[GRAND ADVENTURE!]

the thing about this game is that it is.

Emptygoddess responds:

You make a valid point.

[Sherlock Holmes 2]

I had to subtract half a star for this:

In Author Comments you said "police is" when you should have said "police are."

"is" is the third person singular present of "be"
"are" is the plural present of "be"

Police is a plural noun referring to a group of policemen and women.

You might modify the clause to "The policeman is convinced Charles Williams has murdered Jimmy Johnston,"

But I am going to assume you intended on referring to the plural "police" in which case the clause should have read:

"The police are convinced Charles Williams has murdered Jimmy Johnston,"

I used these resources:

https://www.google.com/webhp?sourceid=chrome-instant&rlz=2C1ASUM_enUS0536US0536&ion=1&espv=2&ie=UTF-8#q=define%3A%20is

https://www.google.com/search?q=define%3A+are&rlz=2C1ASUM_enUS0536US0536&oq=define%3A+are&aqs=chrome.0.69i59j69i58.1167j0j7&sourceid=chrome&es_sm=93&ie=UTF-8

https://www.google.com/webhp?sourceid=chrome-instant&rlz=2C1ASUM_enUS0536US0536&ion=1&espv=2&ie=UTF-8#q=define%3A%20police

https://www.google.com/webhp?sourceid=chrome-instant&rlz=2C1ASUM_enUS0536US0536&ion=1&espv=2&ie=UTF-8#q=present+tense

also.. game good

DeathTiger0 responds:

Hi sharpova,

Thank you for your comment, this is has been fixed.
Of course you are right and even in the game we used the correct plural form: "There's no time, the police are after me."

Thanks again!

[No One Was Here]

nice. has a shadow of the colossus/titan souls feel, due to the music and boss

it needs to be made far more clear that you jump higher when you're jumping along with your past self.

that wasn't logical and didn't fit with the mechanics of the game.

jeremyaburns responds:

Thanks for the feedback! The controls in reverse should be exactly the same as going forwards. Your time-reversed self can "jump" really high if you fall really far though.

[Drink Beer, Neglect Family]

wife wants therapy
daughter dating a black guy - score 3/5
son dropped out of college

esayitch responds:

It doesn't say black guy O.o, it says gang member, I never thought of it being a black guy necessarily.

[Ultimo Soccer UDC]

I have an issue where when I hold down the down arrow it scrolls down on this webpage.

It looks like it would be fun though.

UltimoGames responds:

I heard this before, will do it right in my next game, you can also use WASD, thx for the comments!

[Tim_]

really cool. though the boss fight was way way too hard. hardest boss battle i've ever done and i've played a lot of games including dark souls 1/2 + 3x dlc

KilianoLopes responds:

xD The boss is inspirated in Sigma of Megaman X. Oh gosh i realy love this game

[The Ocean Deep]

too slow. too dark. too common of a narrative. too repetitive of an ambient/music track. too miniscule a sprite.

TechnoWolf99 responds:

Yeah, I know... I did a lot wrong when making this; this was my first game jam after all! xD