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[The Origins of Tuuli: To Be Masked]

over in an instant but fun.

Theihe responds:

As it's just a demo it's short duration isn't surprising. :>
Glad you enjoyed it while it lasted though!

[Little Cherub]

what the hell is the control to make a cloud..? it seems like it inconsistently creates one not by jumping but by being in the air and hitting left or right.. what were you thinking with that?

also you have all these shiny gold pots that do nothing. you can't break or collect them. and the second level doesn't even have a key in it so you can't complete it. rofl.

re: author response

no. the projectiles i shoot just fly right through the vase. it does not hit the vase and do damage.

the cloud creation feels TERRIBLE. absolutely TERRIBLE.

FM-Studio responds:

the cloud is created when you release the jump button. you have full control of cloud creation. you can break all the pot (by shooting it) and inside there are bonuses to collect and obviously also the key. thanks for playing.

[DroworD]

the tutorial is incredibly long and unnecessarily annoying.

HealliesGames responds:

Before was too fast and confusing. I should find a middle ground. <.<

[ANOVA]

I absolutely hate the UI.

There is no reason to force us to wait for the awkward animations to interact with things.

No reason for us to have two options (look and interact). Literally all point and clicks nowadays just do it with one. And if it's designed well it makes for a very seamless quick interface.

Also having the inventory pull up a whole screen of its own and forcing us to hold down the mouse and drag things off to use them on the environment feels incredibly clunky. Not to mention slow.

And when you do inspect something, having to wait for the animation of the portrait sliding over before the descriptive dialog appearse is clunky and cumbersome and annoying as heck.

The way the cursor doesn't react at ALL to being moved over an interactible region makes this a pixel hunt sort of game. Having to resort to clicking that lightbulb was very very ugly imo.

The art and music and sound effects are fantastic.

I'm at the part where I have a small cork. I powered up the robot and you know what? If it was a straightforward even remotely decent UI I'd keep trying every possible combination of sticking the cork in the teddy bear, the robot, the skull etc. and not be horrifically annoyed at the cumbersome UI. But I just can't.

It needs an absolute overhaul.

I feel awkward giving a game with production values this high such a low score, but it is close to unplayable.

And trust me. Your overall score of only slightly over 3 stars with a production quality this high is because of the UI. I'm sure I'm not the only one blown away by how cumbersome it is. I can't believe you made it this way tbh. I really hope you fix it. Because then this could be a lovely little gem.

edit: just an example: with this stupid small cork which has no logical bearing on anything in the environment i'm forced to open the inventory, click and hold, drag off the inventory, and try to click something else in the environment for EACH AND EVERY thing i experiment with. What on earth were you thinking..??

edit 2: ok so i plugged the hole and took off to the next location. as i said the art and sound are top notch which is why i really wanted to at least continue past that. and i would definitely play further if you overhauled the UI. but further than this i simply cannot. sorry.

MontiGames responds:

Thank you for the very detailed and honest feedback! We want to make the game as accessible as possible, although some of what you suggest would eliminate the way we designed some of the puzzles. Everything was intended to be challenging rather than frustrating, but there may be ways we can accomplish the same thing with a slightly different implementation. We'll definitely look into this further, but thank you again for taking the time to clearly detail your concerns!

[Cyborg Highway WIP]

You earn money. But don't waste your time searching through the game for a way to actually use the money to impact the game in any way. There isn't any. It's just a glorified score system.

And the music is just... pathetically weak. The graphics are annoyingly bad. No variety and the road doesn't contrast sharply enough with the vehicles.

The sound effects are also weak.

This just screams low effort.

Pyrian responds:

Thanks for trying it out and giving feedback. This was a Ludum Dare 44 game jam project and is now a work in progress for a more complete experience. Purchasing upgrades will come. I've added dynamic traffic, plus a melee and a ranged weapon, with lots more in the pipeline!

[Pit King]

it's a high quality game but i'm not a fan of the health = currency mechanic at all.

also i don't liek that you can't maze. you should implement a simple pathfinding mechanic. djikstra's algorithm would be fine for this. no need for any heuristics

edit: just a quick update. i came back to play again today (second attempt) and could have easily gotten to wave 30+ but got bored. i liked it more this time when i realized it was all about just spamming bombs and replenishing walls

Oultrox responds:

Totally understandable feedback, The gamejam theme was "your health is the currency" so heh perhaps isn't yoir jam and that's okay.

there's no maze sadly, we didn't want to design this game as maze one but rather something with a bit of spin-off (Say, plants vs Zombie), so A* or Djikstra's algoritm was out of the equation.

Thanks for your feedback!

[Knightin']

so i got to that first puzzle with the QR code. minus a star.

then the second puzzle with the grid of light pads. there was literally NO clue in the room for solving that puzzle. minus another star.

Wolod responds:

QR codes contain solutions, you can solve puzzles without scanning them. Hints are not located in the same room, but they are hidden on the same floor. Here is the screenshot with the hints for the first puzzle: https://imgur.com/Bub0Y6o
Hints for the second one are scattered all around the second floor.
Anyway puzzles unlock HP upgrades and you can beat the game without solving them. Hope this will help :)

[Azumi and the Vertical Slice]

pro: looks good

con: controls are bad

pro: handling/movement is good

con: i absolutely hate this arena style. i was hoping for a real platformer where you progressed through a world

PopStrikers responds:

Actual levels and bosses will be in the full game. Thanks for playing!