way too wordy. music doesn't fit. art styles contrast. it might be that the font doesn't jive with the pixel art.. and in some spots the art is too high of resolution to fit with the pixelated art elsewhere
also the window is way too small for this game. i zoomed in with my browser up to roughly doubling the window size and had a much better gameplay experience.
also the handling felt a bit too touchy. end up flying over the edges of platforms a bit too much for my taste. you'd do the game a surface to give sliding/ground-contact a higher friction more tactile feel.
as i'm writing this review.. the music is striking me as terrible for this game.
i can tell a lot of work went into this.. unfortunately there isn't anything i can say about it that is positive.