lacking in polish. for example, when the mom leaves, i went for the door as the stepdad comes in and he was stuck half way through the wall and i was stuck in place.
but that's just one incident. overall the whole game lacked polish. the way you clipped through walls and how terrible animation looked.
i've used unity for a LOT and i know it's not hard to present an fps that looks and handles a lot better than this. and by not hard i mean it can take as little as a few hours to put something together.
i'm guessing you're new to unity and if so, it's cool that you were brave enough to showcase your first work.
thematically this was great. graphically it was ok. but the physics and animation were some of the worst i've ever seen. audio was good too. writing was good.