A little short compared to your other stuff. Still funny but the animation definitely did not feel on par with your Pleasure Island type stuff. I get that the abrupt ending was intended as a joke.. but I think that was done because of whatever it was that kept you from making it longer. Then you made the abrupt ending a joke to try and pass it off.
On another note:
I took a look at your Patreon but I couldn't find a video where you spoke to people explaining what you were asking for and offering. You had the one where you had the character doing it but people want to see the actual person.
That's a huge part of crowdfunding, that connection between the backers and the backees. I would suggest doing that