huh?
nice song and nice beat.
word of advice: you should not presume to tell us what to get out of the song. let us conjure our own mental imagery without it being polluted by your "suggestion" of what we're supposed to think and feel when we listen to your song.
that's very unprofessional and ruins the flavor. you'd have gotten an 8 or a 9 and voted a 4 instead of a 3 if you'd handled things properly.