sharpnova's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Cadaver]

I felt that the text really cheapened everything.

It's like you were saying "I lack the skills to tell a story in this format so I will fall back on text"

The closing line about them becoming friends was cheesy.

The art and music were fine but the text just ruined it for me.

It really made me feel like I was watching the creation of not only an amateur.. but a rather childish and shallow thinker.

Zombie-Pimp responds:

:'( I'm sorry if I ruined your day.

[Out of Order 1]

pretty corny.

[Googol GLaDOS 2.0]

not enough keys.

[This Is Why]

you have some serious art and animation skills. i'm impressed

[Solo (NATA)]

marred by deplorable voice acting, a disgustingly clashy set of two uncooperative art styles, an annoying and ridiculously non-ambient sound track, pointless story..

the list of things that are weak about this crappy submission goes on. i won't waste my time writing it.

nor will i finish this video.

good day.

Pahgawk responds:

I think I'm still trying to transition from having the music be the main focus and drive to just being a background element, and I'll admit that I didn't get it right this time. I do, however, always try to have some sort of point whenever I make a video these days, so perhaps if you watched the movie through to the conclusion it would be a different story. But then again, if I wasn't able to keep your attention until that point, it is my fault. I'm in a stage where I'm experimenting with style, so maybe next time around it will look more pleasing.

[ZTV News Episode 2]

pretty stupid. toilet humor and bad writing

[Pleasure Island 4]

i laughed when i saw the name sexualobster in the credits

[Kagemono: The Shadow Folk]

characters/sound/music/art were all great. but the story itself.. made no sense and seemed a bit lame. so in the end the zombie fox is a lovable good guy.. huh? cuz he eats shadow things.. that eat your shadow and make you a ghost... none of that made any sense or had any cohesion.

strangely, it was the story and nothing else that ruined this experience for me.

[Batman : The Droppings]

eh.. not funny. the garbage humor gets old. it's funny in the right context. here it just came off as amateurish and stupid.

the art was good though.

[The Eidolon]

Why did you not give credit to the source you obviously stole this story idea from which was Gateway by Frederick Pohl.

Also, I disliked the art style you used for people's faces. Their noses being hideous black marks was distracting, disgusting, detracting, and ultimately detrimental.

But that's besides the point. You lifted a big part of a classic novel and completely attempted to pass it off as your own. I'll be contacting SVA about this.